Mrs Elizabeth Darcy

:) Incredibly good for a half an hour under pressure. My scholastic fruits of half an hour usually end up looking like 'and there was this guy called John and ...

Welcome to YWS! There were several I really liked, such as "I want to see the lightning," and "why can't I have courage?" (I probably liked this one because I ...

Ow. The third stanza. Painfully awesome. One thing--why do you switch back and forth between first person and second person? Are you both in the cult? Painfully awesome. So awful ...

Heard Singing in the Rain? ;) Love the poem. And I really like the last line...except I don't get it...Why is that the reason that thinking of this relationship makes ...

First off, real tears here. Ugh, heartbreaking tear-jerking stuff. It's a really, really sad story, and I enjoyed it. (That sounds so weird...but it's true.) I thought it was interesting ...

Awesome. The original story was pretty depressing, and I think you've done an excellent job in rewriting it. I don't know if I see anything wrong content-wise, but of course ...

Okay. Can I ask how old you were when you wrote this? It says you're sixteen. Did you write this just now? Or was it a long time ago? If ...

AAH! Boy angst! AAH! How many of us can relate? *raises hand* I'm a little thrown off when you change your rhyme scheme in the middle. Well, enough and much ...

I like that even without discernible meter or rhyme, this is still a poem, even if only because of the poetic language. The language is so pretty! Unseen horizons, long ...

:) Have you ever heard the Beatles's song "Hard Day's Night?" Your poem reminds me of that: finding solace with the person you love. You've also captured that sense of ...

Sad and hopeful. Lovely

Yay! Awesome! Adorable! Third stanza: love it. I wish I could attain your level of awesomeness in the field of poetic language. Half the time I end up writing prose ...

Time is a scary thing... I don't think I've reached the age where I start worrying about getting old yet. What's the difference between youthful and young, in that first ...

:) I like. Short, simple, and this what you call blank verse? I'm not as up in poetry terms as I used to be. Oh, you want 'Blue is the ...

See Note before my editing of Prologue. OK. I had this whole thing edited perfectly and thoroughly and then I made a stupid mistake and deleted the whole thing, and ...